Commentary
When I was designing my first magazine front cover I wanted to make it as simple as possible. I took inspiration from 'Vice Magazine' in the way that the main image would sell the magazine. Because for AS media you have to use your own images instead of existing ones, the background on the image and the character shown will have to be described to fully understand my motives behind why I did this. But i realized that you probably wont be able to do that for the coursework so I am scraping this idea.
Strengths of this draft
I love the simplicity of this front cover. I think the quote along with the image, "Rich and famous is hard work", goes fantastically to show what this character is all about. With the character Adam King is lazy fame, the character he portrays is someone who expects the world for no work. This can be symbolised but he hand and face expression as if to say "what?".
I used a simple drop shadow to create the shadow behind the character to add depth and to fill in a large piece of the left head side of the magazine.
The black on white title makes the whole piece stand out from the crowd. It might be simple but very effective for grabbing a potential buyer when he/she is looking at the magazine shelf.
Weaknesses of this draft
Its biggest weakness is also its biggest strength ( in my opinion). The simplicity of this piece makes it look simultaneously half arsed and yet professional in an 'arty' way - but from the examiners point of view this wouldn't get many marks that I need to be successful within this course. There is a lack of detail and too much blank space and this could be called shabby and cheap.
The main image is very low quality but unless I can borrow either a college camera or a friends DLSR camera I will have to make do with my iPhone camera. This is key to a successful front cover like this one where "less is more". If I cant use a good camera, I will have to be creative with the low resolution camera and hopefully play this to my advantage somehow.
Conclusion
To simple, needs more to fill the space and a better quality image to make it look professional to get higher marks.